Our second place High School winning entry was written by Olivia Seidmeyer a student of Briar Woods High School in Ashburn, VA. |
The ripped antique curtains sway back and forth in the late autumn wind accompanied by the dust floating in the air around the broken and stripped home. I look up at my old home and memories flood my mind of times long ago like a river flowing into the ocean. Full of memories good and bad, I find a significant one and remember a time before when I was young and in the same spot I was now, looking up at the window of my new home. I remember thinking the pillars that stood by the red French doors that held up the house were elegant and enchanting and now all they carry is a reminder of loss and pain. At 6 years of age I walked through the doors and immediately felt a chill spread through by body and a sense that I didn't belong. As I walked through the foyer the wood the new wood squeaked and echoed down the long hall. I walked to the end of the hall where I began ascending up the long staircase only ending up at another hallway. I walked to where my parents said my room would be and sure enough it was right there yet I couldn't go inside. I still remember the feeling to this day. The ache I felt was so overwhelming, I just knew it was coming from the room. I ran down the stairs to tell my parents I wanted to change rooms. When I got downstairs they were unpacking the decorations for the living room. I ran up to them and demanded
"You have to move my room!"
My parents said "Why? What's the matter?"
I told them "The room is too cold", because I felt foolish believing in monsters. They agreed and told me I could have the one next to it. I was so grateful so I went upstairs and moved my stuff into my new room.
I could still feel the ache but it felt different and distant.
"It was better though so maybe it'll go away," I wondered.
That night right before I drifted of to sleep I heard a scraping sound coming from the room. It was like an animal trying to escape from a cage. I tried to forget it but then I heard it again. I put on earplugs and it helped for a little while until I heard it began again like a watch on the hour, but this time it felt like the sound was coming from inside my head and I couldn't get rid of it. It was there in the back of my head every night for two years. Two years of questions and wondering and finally I told myself enough, I'm going to stop this, enough. I was a balloon ready to pop full of questions, so I crept out of bed and opened my door as silently as possible, so not wake my parents. I walked about five feet down the hall and face the closed door. I immediately felt the ache grow, but couldn't back down now. Just as I was about to open the door I saw a shadow dart down the hall out of the corner of my eye. When I turned my head I saw the figure of a large animal and attached was the shapes of five blades onto a head sized paw. I immediately ran into my room and locked the door. I heard the heavy sounds of its breathing outside of the door. As I backed away from the door I felt the vibrations of his heavy steps and his breaths slowly getting softer. I dared not open the door when I thought he was gone and instead went back to bed and told myself I had imagined it all. But I knew deep in my mind I hadn't.
I hadn't heard one mysterious thing since that night. Not one off footstep not scratch nor howl until the night before I turned sixteen. It had been an unusually foggy day for the summer. School would be starting in a few weeks but there was already a chill in the air. That night I went to see a drive in movie with my friends and once i'd come back I had been so tired I just fell asleep without even taking off my shoes. I lurched up from my bed around 4 a.m. from a sound I heard in the other room. It was like the scratch of nails on a chalk board. At first I thought I had just been dreaming, so I pinched myself and I didn't feel any different so I realized I was awake. Soon enough I found the sounds were also very real. I hopped out of bed, cracked the door open and peered out into the dark hallway. I saw no shadow or monster of any kind so I stepped into the wide hallway and walked down the hall to the empty room. The ache I had felt before had dulled over time and now I could barely feel it, so I put my hand on the knob and slowly opened the door. Before me there was only boxes. They were mostly empty and had been saved for storage. I began looking through the boxes just incase. Most were empty but one still hadn't been unpacked. I picked it up and put in on the ground in front of me. It was so heavy, it was a brick. I opened the box slowly in case something might jump out at me. When I opened the box I screeched and so did the cat who hopped out of the box and ran into the hallway. I tried to followed it, but eventually gave up and just let it wander.
I thought to myself "My great monster was just a cat!" and I couldn't have felt more stupid. He must have slipped through the window. I walked back to my room and got back into bed. I had the best night of sleep I had had since I moved to the house. Eventually when we found the cat in the house again we created flyers and put them out on my street for a missing cat. No one ever came to claim him and we couldn't just throw him outside, so we kept him and I named him Talon.
After that I remember that what I saw that night wasn't real and Talon was proof of that. At last I knew the answer to the sounds I heard and shadows I saw. I decided it was time to leave the house and let myself believe it was just the cat, but when I looked at the old crumbling house for the last time I swore I saw a large tail drift by the window.